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Pen In Hand

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I discover who I am,

With pen in hand.

Questions are answered,

I learn, I understand.

 

 

I delve into my soul,

Pull out the best of me.

Quickly write them down,

For humanity.

 

 

I discoverd a whole new world,

Once hidden, but now found.

A world of love, of innocence,

Full of wisdom, its profound.

 

 

I have overcome my fear,

With this tool I use to grow.

It has led me on a journey,

To unite  flesh and soul.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    wow!

    I JUST ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!! What a sweet love story about your muse(he obviously) adores you too! very soulful piece!


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    July 20, 2008

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    Ah....

    This is a fine write. Yes, we have a lot of common feelings about the inspired write! Writing is a wonderful tool to get to the heart & bring out what's hidden, good or bad. I really like the way you start this out:

    I discover who I am,
    With pen in hand.
    Questions are answered,
    I learn, I understand.

    I can totally identify! I & ask for guidance. I'm inspired to write & bingo...before I know it my heart & His words are before me! From start to finish this has a nice flow & rhyme. I'm glad you won a trophy. It is


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 9, 2008
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    Oops--Forgot the applause!!

  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 9, 2008

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    I agree with you completely about what a great tool writing is to help us understand ourselves better--Great message here---Well Done!!


  • Darklordkya
    June 28, 2008
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    This is an amazing poem. I just sort of got sucked in. It's very inspiring to read.

    <3Kya


  • SoftlyScreaming
    June 25, 2008

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    what cant i say about this poem?it was pretty inspirational, having said just enough to make me want to write, but i feel like i want more out of this.. you have a great ability, use it. good luck and thanks for entering

  • Amarige
    June 24, 2008
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    Wonderful entry for the contest. best of luck and Thank you
    Ruby


  • maralisa silver member
    June 24, 2008

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    wow this a wonderful poem with so much truth in your words that I am sure many people can relate as writing does overcome fears and helps us grow a little each day and it is a wonderful journey we learn so much about who we are and it cleanses our heart and soul i loved this stanzaI have overcome my fear,With this tool I use to grow.It has led me on a journey,To unite flesh and soul.wonderful poem good luck in the contest

  • wendymolly
    June 24, 2008

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    I have to agree, the flow. Beautiful in every sense of the word. Your a contest finalist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    take care always,
    ~pithyAplomb.


  • None But Nim
    June 21, 2008
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    This is beautifil and flows nicely. Thank you and good luck


  • Nicada silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    Wow! This is beautiful and very wise. So many of us can relate to your words here. Writing can be so healing for ourselves as well as others. You have done an amazing job with this write. Nice! Blessings, Patty


  • Pisces Pieces
    June 14, 2008
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    Perfect! You have expressed what many poets feel, it's so important to recognize and appreciate the value of our writing and how it affects our lives. There are great things that lie within our imaginations and there are great powers in the uses of writing for healing and helping.

    This is really wonderful and reads peacefully and smooth...

    ♥


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    VERY BEAUTIFULLY SAID!!!!

    We who write poetry and each of has our own reasons for doing so write from our hearts and our deepest emotions.


  • AsIThink gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    Very nice...I love how you brought this to life. It has wonderful inspiration; felt like I was on a ride (at a steady, confident speed). Great ideas too; rich with 'soul-quest' stuff.

  • goalsv
    June 9, 2008
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    Wonderful and beautiful, could almost discribe me. You brought out the feeling of writting so well.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    Ah, more wisdom
    from the poet
    of spirituality,
    celebrating
    self-discovery!

    Aesthete


  • Malabu
    June 9, 2008

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    and is it not... those words which
    we tare from our hearts
    soulful they flow...on and on...
    but to see inside like a mirror
    reflections of who we are
    for a moment
    the world sees too-- our spirit in floatation
    Mal

  • davidwright silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    Very well said. Good luck in the contest and happy trail.


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    June 8, 2008

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    fabuluou auntie of mine this is sooooo adorable so so so much
    i am bookmarking this
    love you loadss auntie so so much


  • Olivias Violin
    June 8, 2008
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    Excellent!


  • ourgirlFriday
    June 8, 2008
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    AWESOME!!!!!

    This is fantastic! Wow, the things you can do! Way to go!

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    June 8, 2008

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    Hello Pisces Rainbow.

    Your pen has indeed written many things not just for yourself but for others who read your work, and wisdom shines through many of your pieces.

    I wish you well on your journey.

    Regards.

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