Elate thy soul, tender lover.
Let thy lore sing forth.
Unabashed, go hither.
Secrets revealing, sparking dreams.
Dance thy dance, sweet lover.
Supple legs now swoon.
Eyes gleaming under illuminated moon.
Rose tainted hearts, life ending thoughts.
Shimmering seams, bloodstone dreams.
Hearts unfold once forlorn
O’ radiant night sky.
Sing thy hearts song.
Renew thy wonders.
Brazen fire now aflame.
Mystifying men’s eyes.
Revealing a new love.
Igniting, enchanting dreams
Shattering nightmares grasp.
Jubilate sensations abound
Loving-kindness flows beyond.
Seamless jade, blissful movements.
Quiver unto thy body.
Buzzing sensations surge.
Engulfing ones heart.
Her eyes shimmering gleam.
Drink in mine ecstasy.
Skin glistening, sparkling emerald.
Bubbling rapture seethes.
Dance thy epic dance.
Hearken thy wonders!
Swirling vexation intoxicate.
Sweet breeze swathes form.
White legs lustrous by moonbeams.
Giving off inflamed desire.
Cascading atop shoulders.
Her sumptuous hair gleams.
Fragrance of sweet passion
Pulsing from her being.
Mine eyes behold, mind transfixed.
Entwined majesty ,splendor on high
Author notes
I <3 kitties ^_^
A contest entry
- [[ I wish i had a cookie]] For All by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
430 points, ended June 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This poem has great use of words throughout. Kind of an old fashioned style- in a good way. I think you really did justice to your theme. Love poetry can be great sometimes. And this was a good one. I especially like:
Skin glistening, sparkling emerald.
Bubbling rapture seethes.
I wonder if you wrote this for any one person in particular? Either way, its a good poem.
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Wow this is great
very well written
i love kittens also they
are so darn cute :]
thanks for entering my contest
i wish you the best of luck
for you
xxx--<3--
Shelly -
nice
very old school, the romantic lives and writes. im sure some very lucky person apprecites this very much
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Refreshing! Immaculate imagery! This poem is sensational and it gives off a sense of flawless beauty. I loved reading this one dear poet, twas profound indeed! Thanks for sharing and keep up the incredible work. XD
~Elizabeth~
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