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I Feel in My Spirit

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Summer is a tangible dream

that waits for me

like a loved one with open arms.

 

I long to walk in its warmth

with reassurance

that I will be comforted

 

and though this season is short

I do not waste time

pondering the cold bite of winter

 

as I covet things green and beautiful.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    And I've seen some of your photos and know what beauty you are surrounded in.. only made more glorious by summer!!

    Gorgeous write!

  • tara wilson gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    nice, mj


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    You have said an awfully lot in so short a space
    Realy nice write.
    And summer does seem short after a long cold winter.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest


  • secberm
    June 8, 2008

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    Well done, old bean. Ahh, but the summer SEEMS short. Time flies when having fun and methinks you have too much fun in the summer. Write on and good luck. One.

    Dez


  • BellaD
    June 8, 2008

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    Lovely poem!

    Love these lines:
    I do not waste time

    pondering the cold bite of winter

    Beautifully written! Best of luck in the contest.


  • mzmikki
    June 8, 2008

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    Ahh... you make summer sound so wonderful!!! In Anchorage it might be! But here in Louisiana its miserable. Thanks for the refresher!!


  • Avendesora Dreamer
    June 8, 2008

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    Who better to speak of the fleeting pleasure of summer than someone who lives in alaska? This made me warm on the inside like sun on my shoulders even tho the sun i hiding...good luck!


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    I know how long you've been waiting for summer, dear and how much it means to you to be able to get out and wrap yourself in her warmth.

    Best wishes in the contest

    Always
    Margaret

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