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It's True

Running through a ~rainbow, ~holding hands tightly,
through a bed of wildflowers. We packed a lunch
of ~peanut butter and jelly sandwhiches, milk
with cupcakes to picnic in full view of the
rainbow. It was great after we had frolicked.
I'm ~loving you.

We are running together toward~happily ever after.

~If only it could last eternally.

Stopping, you ~hug me tighter than ever before.

You've ~taken me to a new plateau of love.

Your ~embrace is ~warm and ~passionate.

Our love is ~beautiful. Sometimes, we sit in ~silence

under the ~moon in the ~shadow of night; and

the world is ~dark. You are my ~angel of might.

Your kisses are like a gentle, sweet ~perfume.

I believe your ~sincere ~heart with every kiss.

They are continuously ~drowning all ~rot, ~sorrow  

and ~fear that have built sandy walls within me.

The more ~father and ~mother object to us, the

more I ~care for you. I'm ~wondering how long

they will try to ~kill what we have. I never find myself

wondering if your love is real. I'd rather someone

~murder me than to keep us apart. I know you feel the

same. My heart says so. I will ~scream with joy, I am

so happy.

 

Author notes

I used all thirty-one words in section five for my poem. Shancy Fayre.

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  • penman gold member
    January 3, 2009
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • Breathless Ballons
    June 10, 2008
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    wow, I'm impressed you used all the words. Great poem!

    thanks for entering & good luck