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Lead Pencil Player's Prayer

Lead on O graphite lead,
Explain your thoughts to me
As on the paper we
Dance on, dot, dash ahead.
Pencil to paper wed
Eternally may free
New versions constantly –
Creations scarcely read  ?
In moments, trammels shed,
Life sparkles inwardly,
Poetic harmony :
Line after line is fed
As on thought waves we’re sped.
Yet with sense, form, in key
Enlightenment we see
Responding, sharing spread ...

 

 

  

 

 

 

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  • IronMaiden1236
    August 7
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    Nice flow, ingenious...


  • Ruby34
    June 24

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    I love this poem, from the simple words to the flow..best of luck in the contest
    Ruby


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 8

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    "Pencil to paper wed
    Eternally may free
    New versions constantly –
    Creations scarcely read ?"

    Sometimes, I am the only one who reads my words...& it is enough, my Friend. I can never read enough of your incredible words, though.


  • Lily otv
    June 8

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    I think you should add this poem to your humour list as I found it amusing. I wonder if your computer uses graphite lol. As one who has temporarily lost her muse I wish my lead would lead me somewhere, anywhere ... and explain its thoughts to me. "Creations scarcely read?" ... yes it is a shame that millions of excellent pieces of work go unread but if the creation of them allows the author to release worries from their mind, isn't that a good enough reason for them to be written? This poem is short, sweet, to the point and I like it very much