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A Poetess Pen to Parchment Pad

Tongue to paper sowing seeds,
a rain dance of assurance,
beckoning earth to placidly spin
as if kissing life with rhythmical
lips, all the while poetic fingers
dance in virtual space where
emptiness once dwelt, creating
yet another wonderful verse from,
a poetess pen to parchment pad.








Author notes

I wrote this poem for Karen (Klassy Lassy)
a dear friend, fellow Oregonian and a fantastic poetess
Please visit her page and poetry

;)
Karen, you get better soon, kk   

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  • Pearl-1
    June 18, 2008

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    awww dove..this is lovely..hope karen gets better soon..good luck in the contest..xxx one for karen


  • Kari gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    I love the part about " a rain dance of assurance ". This is such a nice poem to write for your friend Karen.
    I hope that she does feel better soon.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    Heart-felt beautiful poem--hope bounds throughout the poem for your friend. Hope she gets better soon!


  • individuality gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    a good dedicational poem, i like the rain dance imagery, and coupled with assurance it gives a good light smile. let the space be filled with poetry so eyes can join the dance.


  • queen Moderators member
    June 8, 2008
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    this is a wonderful poem, i can tell she must be a dear friend to you


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    What an impressive write. You do everything so well. This is a wonderful tribute to your friend. Well done. Good luick in the contest, but I know that is not the intent.


    • FifthDove
      June 8, 2008
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      Hey you Jeannie gurl, thanks for the comment
      I feel special
      Love ya kiddo


  • klassy lassy
    June 8, 2008

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    On the wings of a Dove!

    I felt Oregon in this poem immediately, and recognized your gentle pinions. You know her temperament well, and she brings such a lilt to Dove's wings. How can I not be carried aloft, too?

    Your quill leaves virtually no empty spaces here, Poetess. My heart is full.

    ~Karen

    • FifthDove
      June 8, 2008
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      You better be on the mend already sister orstate You know how much I lkook forward to reading your works And I thank you very muchly for the comment


  • pattyann4500
    June 8, 2008

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    How lovely this is for such a beautiful lady, Dove. Karen is one of those poets who touches everyone she meets with her magical words. I know this will touch her heart. Patricia


  • tomisb
    June 8, 2008

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    She brings a verdant world to touch us with feelings we perhaps knew but did not experience until she penned them. You capture this beautifully and honor her well.
    Love, Tom B.

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