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meditation in the garden

in radical humility
the butterfly sits
upon the twig of mulberry
as the sun shines
in the green garden
the dragonfly
skims the surface
of the pond
hovers an instant
is gone iridescent
the lone bee
sipping nectar
in the yoni
blooms
hums hymns
i know them all
my soul

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    Yes..this is it..you have created its picture ...so wonderfully image is here..well done....thank you so much for entering my contest.....


  • parenchma
    June 8, 2008
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    The bees hymn is Hmmmmm....


  • BellaD
    June 8, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    Lovely use of imagery. Brings the scene to life. I like the ending...i know them all
    my soul.
    Best of luck in the contest.


  • just mercedes gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    such peaceful beauty in this meditation, it leaves me humming hymns.