its not like life is just a fad
sometimes its good and sometimes bad
but today was not the best
so i gotta be happy not be mad
its not like there's no answer to be used
both to the guilty and acused
but today was kinda weird
and my brain feels quite abused
its like my courage was betrayed
i coulda gone but shoulda stayed
but today had lots of freaky vibes
so i just ran away and played
i found a path so i can strive
got literal to not contrive
but today nothing was clear
so i walked fast to speed my drive
---Pause - guitar solo
here today my heart is beating
tomorow could be a sudden meeting
a dance with all time offers
you know life is here retreating
as i look for signs of blessing
once a miracle undressing
a chance to renew my mortal hope
instead of hiding out and stressing
with all the colors to lament
sometimes it seems my glow is spent
in moments of passion resolute
then left to cool to black intent
at first im solid strong and straight
but soon ill break apart and wait
for the wind to come and take me
on the smoky wings of fate
...on the wings of fate
-----Chorus
im me... im sad... im confuzed... im afraid... im alive...
im me... im fleeting... im distressing... im decadent... i dissipate... i lament...
im sad... im confued... im afraid... im alive... im me...
im fleeting... im distressing... decadent... i dissipate... i lament...
-----Chorus end
...of past loves in life ive spent
to those who came to stay then went
but nothing lasts forever
i just wish i knew what it meant
im bold
even when my heart is weak and cold
when trouble comes to take its mold
to set down low and take a stance
and make my actions unfold
so your heart seeks signs of blessing
all the dangers youll be facing destroyed
our world built of passions resolute
a flaming giant pacing
sometimes youre not all youre cracked to be
but then who is master who is flea
i guess its about footsteps as you try
not so much the end of all you see
so my heart seeks signs of blessing
all the dangers ill be facing destroyed
my world built of passions resolute
a flaming giant pacing
sometimes im not all im cracked to be
but then who is master who is flea
i guess its about your footsteps as you try
not so much the end of all youll see
Author notes
Lyrics ©2008 by Elizabeth D a r k w e l l
Music ©2008 by Reflections in Black™
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Comments
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JUDGED!
"sometimes im not all im cracked to be
but then who is master who is flea
i guess its about your footsteps as you try
not so much the end of all youll see"
That a perfect ending stanza for this poem,
well penned indeed. Thanks for entering
and all the best to you in the contest.
Ken -
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thanxu
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This would be such a kickass song! I really wish I could hear it
Love the billion different emotions it gives off. Thanks for entering my contest!
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Excellent!
Very mature rhyme, worded well and with much meaning.

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awsome
i love this poem!
its so deep and so emotionall!
Keep up the good work!
-cecilia
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