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Deep water


The water was deep and cold,
I felt ever drop go into my lugs and Darkness toke over,
the view form above was sweet.

Goodbye cold world, you cant hurt me no more,
resting on this wooden planck, is all i have to wonder
and i see you standing there with your hands on your hips
looking down at me on the ground, you kick my blacked blue body
once more and yelled get up and fight you whore.

Oh how the Water felt as I jumped in and
taking in the coldness and darkness as it pulled me down I'm in peace now.

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bleed. ending the pain with in my heart

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    This is powerfully sad, death can be a release to some. Very well penned, good luck