Are you shackled by the chains of sin
Is your heart burdened down with care
The load you carry is very heavy
And no help is seen anywhere
Just turn your eyes toward Jesus
Tell Him all of your earthly woes
His loving arms will enfold you
You can take Him wherever you go
Just ask Him to come into your heart
Be the King upon your heart's throne
He'll wash away all your sins
You will never again be alone
You'll be as free as an eagle
You'll soar higher and higher each day
With Jesus walking beside you
You'll never again lose your way
A contest entry
- WOW YOU WON'T BELIEVE THIS!!! by elmundopasa1.
300 points, ended July 4, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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very good take on the prompt. smooth flow, good rhyme, overall you did a great job. thanks for entering.
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Thank You
elmundopasa 1, your kind comment is appreciated. It was my pleasure to enter your contest...Katie
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Yes Jesus is here for us and died for all our sins. We need only to ask and he will come into our lives. Thanks for sharing this very uplifting write. Good luck in the contest
Theresa
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Thank you tawk. How are you and the little and Jason. It's been awhile since I last spoke to you. I'm taking it easy. I have an infection in my left leg. I go back to the Dr. on Tuesday. Take care and God bless you all. Katie
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