Sweet aroma
Under swaying palms
Memories of love
Made with you
Enjoyment
Remembering
The day we fell in love
In the sand
Me and you
Eternally
Author notes
season: summer
A contest entry
- sprays of summer by hugs and kissies.
600 points, ended July 8, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP 2008: Become Published by B Chandler.
2000 points, ended August 3, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ayyy write me something..Anything you want by tearfulgirl420.
300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 58 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This presents a wonderful picture of Summer so much so the picture you have is superfluous. Nicely done
Cyber Artist...
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this was just lovely i could feel the breeze an smell the sun tan lotion
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WTG! Good luck in the contest -
The only complaint I have is that the background combined with the blue font really shot my sensitive eyesight (I hid the background for better reading) but other from that , really nice
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The only complaint I have is that the background combined with the blue font really shot my sensitive eyesight (I hid the background for better reading) but other from that , really nice
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This is such a sweet poem. I could feel the love radiate. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Really nice!
Summertime...and the living is easy...fish are jumping...and the cotton is high...
One of my all time favorite songs!
I love your acrostic!
Regards,
Jennifer
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So sweet and this whole piece you have seemed to capture a mood or feeling or moment, aided by your background and your pic
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Great i liked it alot very well written thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
This doesn't meet the line requirements of my contest.
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Good i liked it alot. Very well written and its so describeing
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Awww this is so sweet. I don't know whether it was eternal, but it's the feeling you had at the time that makes it so beautiful and magical and most importantly, real.
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Wow, usually I hate acrostics, the majority of the time it just seems like the poets trying to squeeze anything that works into the poem as long as it gets complete. and therefore the poem is pretty much horrible.
This poem is different, like a person commented below, you wouldn't know its an acrostic if you didn't tell us, thanks for entering. -
Sweet and to the point enjoyed this
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This was a good acrostic.It really had a nice little story to it!good luck in my contest!
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i really like the use of the arcostic here, i have been exploring those and this one seems to be well writen thank you for the entry into my contest good luck and as always keep up the wonderful writing ~Amy
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wow!! its an acrostic!?? wow!!! lol i didnt even notice.. lol .. sorry!
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wow! this is short but it sayz alot. peacefull. smooth. good luck in ur contest! i love the picture and background that go with it !!!! they make the poem more empisized! love it!!
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A very nice acrostic very well written and tne flow was really smoothe. Beautiful memories.
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Boy, I hope you win!
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GREAT WORK!
This one for sure will get a gold! THANKS for this wonderful acrostic!!
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