Hello there wonderful Lady
I don't believe we've met
But I would like to give you
The loveliest of flowers yet
I'm sending you some daffodils
To brighten up your smile
Also I will bring to you
A bouquet and visit for awhile
The bouquet will be filled
With flowers of many shapes and size
Then you can ooh and aah
When you see them with your eyes
I will send you many roses
And a vase of lilac's too
Also many marigolds
And tulips, just for you
Gladiolas in a nice array
Hyacinths with their hues
Peonies with their beauty
And larkspurs are just a few
Lastly, I send an orchid,
Many lovely lilies too
I think that will be enough
To bring enjoyment to you
A contest entry
- Celebrating the klassiest of lassies by tomisb.
2250 points, ended June 25, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Very nice write. Nice visuals of imagery.
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Ohhh!
....and Katie, you did bring such enjoyment in this garden of heart blooms. Thank you.
I am so smiling at the wonderful array laid before me here and have a soft spot for lilacs. They brings such heady romantic scents to spring and a hint of love grown old together...beautiful antiquity. I remember, too, when I was a child many years ago, my mom used to plant larkspur. Your flowers of the heart are a delight I'll treasure for years to come.
I'm happy to meet you now!
~Karen
P. S. I love well done rhyming poems and this is just lovely!
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Thank You Karen
So very nice to meet you also. I am pleased that you enjoyed reading my poem, and all the flowers. My Mother had a beautiful flower garden. I couldn't tell a flower from a weed when they first start to sprout. Never had any good results with growing anything. When I planted a vegetable garden the Rabbits got all the greens. Thanks for reading my poem.
Katie Lazette
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Thank you Tom B. for you very kind comment on my poem. I hope this will bring much joy to Karen...Katie Lazette
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There is a dance of joy and a smile in the shared treasure as you come forth to meet our lovely lady.
Thank you.
Love, Tom B.
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Thank you tomisb for the HM and for your kind comment...Katie
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there is a whole spring in your poem.....lovely
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