One memory,
Simple Enough,
for one who can think,
Of for a rough,
The minds of many,
Go for afar,
But only few,
Can reach farther,
as for one memory,
I have gone to a distant place,
To a place where i can do as i can,
A place,
I can roam free,
free of mind,
free of power,
free of life,
A place where there is no trouble,
a place where i could do as i pleased,
Somewhere,
Anywhere,
But here,
I could not survive,
Anywhere,
But there.
A contest entry
- Intrigue me with a memory by Amunet Wolfbane.
1000 points, ended June 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think? i dont think its very good...
Comments
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I think we all have this sort of place somewhere inside of ua and it does often beackon. Nicely done
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