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Love Light

Missing image
Slave to love, blinded in the past,
mid hurtful lies love did not last.
Years of bitterness, strangle hold,
sad love stories remain untold.

Pulling you in they make you numb,
into loneliness you succumb.
Then in darkness a light is shown,
revealing love you have never known.

One that is lasting with eternal wings,
love fills your heart and makes it sing.
Sometimes we hurt and lose our soul,
with His love we begin to feel whole.

Do not despair when all seems lost,
God died for us, he bore the cost.
Search for the dove within His light,
eternal wings fly as love takes flight.


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I pray that God will be more and more at home in your hearts as you trust in Him. May your roots go down deep into the soul if God's marvelous love. Ephesians 3:17

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  • Beret55 silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    That was beautiful Sandy. HE does watch over us.


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 20, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you for this nice comment. Always nice when you drop by. You take care,

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • SandraMVeinot
    June 8, 2008

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    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Good Morning!!!

      Thank you for reading and the smiles. Bless you, Sandy


  • elmundopasa1
    June 8, 2008

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    yes. very well written indeed. fantastic job. i like the alluding to different pieces of the pic, like the dove and the cross and light and shackles etc. very well done. perfect take on the prompt. :-)

    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Nice Comment

      Thank you for reading anmd commenting. Take care, Sandy


  • tawk gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Wow what an uplifting and spiritual write. Yes we all need to trust in the Lord. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Theresa


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Hello Theresa

      Thasnk you for dropping by. Always so nice when you do. Hope you are doing well today. Blessings for you.

      Take care,
      Sandy


  • ProudMomma
    June 8, 2008

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    great write!! good luck on the contest!! this is a winner by me


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Nice Comment!!!

      Ah Thank you for your lovely and thoughtful comment. It was most appreciated. You take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    June 8, 2008

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    While human love may come and go, God's love for us is eternal. I think you do a great job of giving us the thread of God's love to hang onto when all else seems chaos. Nicely done.


  • Katie Lazette
    June 8, 2008

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    Praise The Lord Sandy

    Your poem is full of truth. His love can make one whole again. Thank you for sharing this with us all here on AP and good luck in the contest...Katie Lazette


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you Katie. A very nice comment. Always sa pleasure to have you pop in. Take care,.

      Bless Yoiu,
      Sandy


  • simpliciti
    June 8, 2008

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    Lovely

    This is a lovely poem and very touching to the heart and spirit. Clearly it represents your connection to faith and more....I really love this!

  • chiefmac
    June 8, 2008

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    Great work penned for the contest. This faded love has wonderful rhyme and a compelling relationship with God to guide and warm the heart and gather hope that life moves on and becomes sustaining for renewing commitment to life.


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Very Lovely Comment!!!

      Well Good Morning Dan. A wonderful way to start a new week reading one of your lovely comments. Thank you for reading and encouraging my writing. Your thoughts and friendship are both appreciated. You havwe a great day.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • Bob Fox
    June 8, 2008

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    God

    In my long search for him it seems I have taken the road towards hell. But those that find God ,I think, are very lucky indeed. The poets words smile now


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Great Comment

      Well Bob, sometimes it just seems like the road to hell. Trust me, I have been on that road before. But somehow when the time is rifgght you will see His light and you will be on the path to His love. He waits as long as it takes for His chiuldren to come home. It took me 50 yrs. but it surte was worth the wait.

      Bless you Bob,
      Sandy


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    I can see the tone and the voice are very truely touchy the essence of this life with so much depth and attention of the poetic strength..well done...


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      A Lovely Comment

      Good Morning my friend. So nice to have you stop by and read my poem. I appreciate your thoughts on my poetry. It is an honor from someone so talented. You have a wonderful day.

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Xianaria gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Do not despair when all seems lost,
    God died for us, he bore the cost.
    Search for the dove within His light,
    eternal wings fly as love takes flight.

    ~ Very nice. I like this piece, wonderfully written.

    • Sandygram silver member
      June 9, 2008
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      Thank You

      I appreciate you stopping by and reading. You take care. Sandy

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