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love held frozen in the silver tears of a lonely woman

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  • KayJay
    June 8, 2008
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    A simple statement that touches the heart and finds a sympathetic resonance... Well done.
    Ken


  • Angelflower
    June 8, 2008

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    Awww this was a wonderfully sad line!
    You packed so much emotion and imagery into this!
    And yet it's so small!!! Well done!
    I wish you the best of luck!!

    Angel