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The Heart

Open up a little wider
I don't think you're screaming loud enough
This place between pleasure and pain
Is heaven in my somber eyes
Why are you crying, my dear?
After all, you knew this day would come
You broke your promises and I am angry
Are you prepared to find salvation in blood?

I'm sorry, does this hurt?
Not that I care, but you're so cute when you scream
Twist a little more, I can't get much deeper
The hilt is at it's end, serration begin
I can't say that I'm sorry because I'm not
You can say anything you want, I'm not stopping
Time for you to feel what I feel inside
Only physically cause emotions never got to you

Oh a gift to see you cry
Thank God for this day that I'm alive
This chance I get to see you squirm before my eyes
Don't worry about him, my dear, no one else is
And he doesn't have eyes to lay on you anymore
The only problem I have now is cleaning up the mess
And where to wash my bloody hands

Yes, my darling, slip away
There's something waiting for you on the other side
I made a deal with the devil
Sorry I didn't mention that earlier
But it kind of slipped my mind as I was taking you from you
You said once upon a time, 'my heart is always yours'
Well, my love, now it's true
And isn't your heart the ugliest thing you have ever seen?

Author notes

Just a ramble, really. This is not actually going to happen.
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  • DazedAndConfused88
    July 5, 2008
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    This is

    Disturbing.

    But in a good way =P

    Nice write.


  • Poetic Obscenity
    June 23, 2008

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    -inserts evil laughter here-

    Ok. It's between this and another ..as to gold and silver. I mean, this is straight up wonderful. You've got an amazing piece. The sadistic outlook of it all just kills me. =] wonderful.

    <333
    Thank you and Goodluck.