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And end it in breathless gasps

I want to be your passionate angel
wearing desire like perfume

I want to be the bullet in your gun
or even your lethal injection
I want to be the poison you drink

when we first met you shook my hand
you told me your name and inquired mine
right after you said it I forgot
so in my head I called you john

a bright red jewel
being held as an offer up
"Twilight"

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  • inaeternum
    June 8, 2008
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    thank you, yes ppl having to memorize my poetry would be awesome.


  • Melodies
    June 8, 2008
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    As smart and pretty as any poem, ever, and you might even become famous for this and get published in every high school English literature book and kids will have to memorize your poem and say it in front of the class and explain what it means. I would so love it if that happened.