Soothing my soul
with a perfect purr,
enveloping my emotion
in softest feline fur
I'm putty in
such precious paws
Author notes
Prompt: Pic, 20 words
Artist Credit:
http://lucias-tears.deviantart.com/art/The-Gardener-s-Kitten-81413924
(a lil twist on being putty in someone's hands hehe aww)
A contest entry
- 7 entries, 20 words #7 by notorious.
400 points, ended June 8, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hehe.
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Aww! This is such a sweet write! The picuture is adorable! A very cute write!
♥
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Wonderful
Great choice of 20 words. And so deserving of the silver. Congratulations. -
Hello Kiwigirljacks.
Awwwwwwww, that is so cute, s/he will still have blue eyes at that age, can almost make them out in that pic. Your words are very true as well. Many studies have stated it is actually therapeutic to stroke cats; it has a very calming influence. Also when a cat purrs it resonates in their body, and strengthens their bones, due to the fundamental frequency. A bit like how 'Om' that certain practioners of meditation say resonates through their body, although for them it is more than just body. Actually could be for cats as well, but obviously harder to find out, ahhaha. Not sure what effect the harmonics of the sound have but they can't be negated. Anyway, back on topic. Very sweet poem, adorable little tufty kitten.
My regards.
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sooo cute
I love kitties! -
Awwwww!
This is such a very sweet, and soft piece of soothing comfort in few words. Very well penned for the image prompt! Adorable!!!!
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Ah, you can never go wrong with a kitten. Animals have such a therapeutic effect on such a large range of people, I find it fascinating.
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Oh so cute. Um I have some 10 to 20 kittens, not sure as I haven't found them all yet. want some?
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That's a lot of kittens!! Yeah! I'll have some.. 
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pretty little thing great poem abe *clappy* *clappy* *clappy*
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Oh So Cute
Sounds devinely comforting that precious little kitten. Fabulous job in so few words with the pic. Congradulations on the silver. You are so gifted and I love your poems. Such a wide range of talent in writing you have and I so admire you for it.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Your Sis
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Beautiful
Aww, this is so sweet and wonderful. Congrats on the silver.
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How very sweet! Beautifully worded, congratulations on the silver.
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Thanks for entering this wonderful entry as you knew you were condemned to...LoL =D
Love the verb use of 'enveloping' and that last stanza is hilarious and so clever!! You bring the adorableness to life and the person holding it to life as well...awesome. Thanks for entering =] -
awwwwwwwwwwwww this is sweet.... i have a fat lazy cat... lol..... he use to be tiny but isnt anymore... he is hugh and thats no lie.... great write here... and thanks for sharing this with us... and gooodl luck in contest...
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Well, once again from this psychotic perv... "kitty", "envelope", "purr", and best of all "putty in..." Hmmm... Write on sis.
Dez
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Aww sis this was so beautifully emotional and heartfelt. Such a lovely poem for a cute little picture hehe. Loved it to pieces!! You create such warmth within your writes, where its so comforting to read, even when its sad.
Bravo!!
best of luck in the contest, this deserves gold! -
So adorable! Purr-fect! Great wording for this!
best wishes in your contest.
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aww! That is just darling! weeeeeeee!
purrrrrrrrr.
Alliteration ... weeeeeeeeee!
Love this my Kiwi Queen ... now, how do I turn myself into a kitten ... hmmmmm.
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Awww......omg!!! This was just adorable!!!! LOVE IT!!! That little kitty face is soooooooo cute!!!! Best wishes here
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bravo!
this is SO SO SO cute!
love it!
& the picture is so endearing
wonderful job on this!
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so sweet, reminds of my calico I had to leave when I hit the highways
Joe
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aww, yes cats really do seem to heal us in some way dont they!
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Yeah, kitties are cool, and they are very loving. Loved this Jacks.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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indeed, here are few things
which can sooth one's heart-
and subdue one's anguished soul-
like a kitten-
which probably explains why-
I have nine cats?
Lovely, like Cherry juice in
your frig.
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Ah, so sweet and so true. Nothing like a kitten to make a person purrr!
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It is purrfect hunni Glad you posted it
All the best in the contest
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Very Cool
Being a dog guy, I find this one difficult to relate to, but it is very well written. Great Job! ~Gar
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I love your twist, its great lol good luck in the contest lol
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aw, this is so cute!
wonderful write. =]
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How adorably sweet!! awww Loved this!
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This is just "purrrrfect"!!! I loved every word and the pic is so sweet!!!
Lovely~
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Aww thanks sis! Not my usual kind of write but was soooo cute how could I resist
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Beautifully touching and adorable sis!!! loved the smooth rhyme of the first stanza and the closing with its alliteration almost made me melt with you. So sweetly penned and wonderful for this kitten pic!
-Dan
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hehehe so cute, adorable poem, a delight to read SiS, hope you do well
Cin
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aww cute auntie
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aaww!!
Seriously, I almost couldn't get pass the pic! that kitten is 100% adorable! anyways sweet write to go with the picture. lots of luck to to you in the contest
lady!
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This hold a smile for soft and furry. The reader is brought to touch and welcome child like excitement for this work. Short, sweet and smooth as the pur it emits.
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*cries* Now I wants a kitty!
This truly is beautiful Aunt Jackie, it really touched my heart. I've been quite messed up inside lately but this....this made it feel all better for just a little while. I really hope you win.
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AWW!!! sissy you did a wonderful job!
This was so sweet and cute!!!
Aww look at the kitty!!! Bravo!
I really loved your take!
Best of luck!!
Angel
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