I wrote words yet to be understood, as I held my breathe.
A contest entry
- One-Liners by theworldisquiethere.
900 points, ended July 2, 2008, 38 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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I really like this
It's really quite beautiful, and has such a feel of innocence and insecurity.
It's really pretty.
Best of luck in your contest dear
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LOVE YOUR SHORT WRITES
LOVE YOUR SHORT WRITES, I'VE PONDERED OVER YOUR WORDS MANY TIMES, WONDERING IF I'VE GOT IT RIGHT, ONLY TIME WILL TELL.....loveyaseeyabye.....me. -
lovely!
so much said in so few words!
one can only hope to make one's words understood
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Bravo!!! yes many of us hold our breath until that one person can understand the meaning hidden within our words!!! Well done!! I wish you the best of luck!
Angel
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Awesome!
Wonderfully worded.
All the best sweet soul!
Much love and light!
-Timothy
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Wow....this is wonderful. Really it is... Its deep in few words. Nice take one the prompt. I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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Yes!! I do exactly the same! I hold my breath often when I write... and wonderful if it's deeper meaning will be understood!
Fab one liner sis!
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wow, beautiful! The simplicity shocks me with all the meaning stored up in not much more than ten words. Wonderful! You've inspired me!
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