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Late Night








As the midnight winds blow, serenity overwelms the senses, creating exhilaration.








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  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    This is one of my favorite one-liners I've ever read

    It's so beautiful, and paints such a lovely picture!

    Best of luck in all your contests dear


  • music-office-ghost
    June 21, 2008

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    Wonderful use of imagery and I just love how this poem makes you FEEL what you're reading...great job


  • theworldisquiethere
    June 9, 2008

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    had to read this one a few times. midnight winds. beautiful imagery. and serenity leading to exhilaration. beautiful


  • crimsondew
    June 8, 2008
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    Yes..lovely feeling emerging from this line!