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In Too Deep 1

Journeying,
     beyond here and now,
I climbed
     my mind's staircase

















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  • Stardust-luvr
    June 9, 2008

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    deep and intense with empowering brevity yet with profound silkiness of your endearing soul well done!!! many blessings always it truly defines the friend I have in you xoxoxoxo


  • A63-Angel
    June 8, 2008

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    i like it

    this is very good and packs a lot of imagery into a few lines! nice job!!


  • Riftkin gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    deep like your soul
    with wings that surely fly
    soaring to the heavens
    as life continues by


  • Patpowers silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    Nice to know how you got your name. In Too Deep...it's deep allright! THANKS!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    truly deep!!!

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