Love made you a promise
A promise that meant everything to you
A promise of today and future
A promise you believed to be true
I really wanted it to believe it, too
Really wanted his words to be true
Love broke a promise
A promise that tore you apart
A promise that left you in the dust
A promise that shattered your heart
That was the day I watched you cry
The day I felt a part of myself die
Love left another promise
A promise you still believe
A promise made to be broken
A promise that will rip your heart off your sleeve
I can only hope this promise will hold fast and true
Only hope this promise will end well for you
Author notes
I wrote this about six months ago and just got around to posting it...
Please tell me what you think
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Sherri, I never know where to email ya hope ya get this! I lvoe and miss you! I' hope I"ve not screwed up the mother daughter thing! Cause I am worried bout you!
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Cool
Kinda reminds me of the shitty things I did before I left...its a good write.
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Honey gr8 write! Give us a call some time soon, we'd love to hear from you
XOXOXO mom & dad
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wow
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Wonderful, I really like this... well plus it seems to speak of the past few months here.. I hope you are well!
Bri
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This is gorgeous. I really like the repeating of "A promise," it really strngthens the intention of the poem. I really like this and I think it is beautiful. Only thing I can suggest is to try and avoid clique ryhmes like "cry" and "die". Everyone does it. Me too, sometimes it's unavoidable, I annoy myself when I do it.
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