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and tomorrow a different hue

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I love my new fur lined boots
but now have lost the kitten

The building had been derelict so long
but now was inhabited by poor, previously homeless people
squatting within the dampness of it's decaying walls

As the clouds linger in the cool night sky
creating eerie shadows
she bears her soul to her closest friend
Tears stain her now molded pillow

Typical, just when I was having fun

I was just

born too late

Author notes

A patchwork poem from my poems, title from http://allpoetry.com/poem/4307113
next 2 lines from http://allpoetry.com/poem/4306563
next 3 from http://allpoetry.com/poem/4304143
next 4 lines from http://allpoetry.com/poem/4304051
and last 3 lines from http://allpoetry.com/poem/4303854 to total 12 lines, this was fun and was my first patchwork poem..good luck all

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  • Melodies
    June 13, 2008
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    Again, I love this poem and laugh every time at the first part.

  • Melodies
    June 8, 2008

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    I am laughing but feeling kind of sorry for the kitten that got made into fur lined boots. You have put together such a great patchwork poem, I just LOVE it! CUTE and CLEVER!


  • Patpowers silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    Good work on this! Nice style and patchwork...keep it up!!


  • LittleAnn
    June 8, 2008
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    wow, that was interesting, thanks for commenting on mine, and good luck!

    Annie