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maa
reminder of the source
of manifestation
calling me
home
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Author notes
maa - the initials of my social identity MArion MAntel
maa - the divine feminine
maa - the universal mother
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photo in border : sri mâ ânandamayî
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A contest entry
- The depth of brevity by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 8, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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we need reminders
Your brief poem shows the importance of naming, how we relate a spark of divinity to a place in the universe. A name can be a challenge or a label, but it is never neutral. I like the name you have chosen, and you remind me I should recall what my name means too.
Congratulations for the trophy!
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I agree, my dear MAAAAAAArgaret !!!
love you bunches
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Your poetry runs as clear as a river and as deep as the ocean! Your name reflects like sunlight on water and I see that you will bore more in one sentence than many can do in a book.
Congrats on the silver!
Keep well
Becks
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Yes, my Friend.
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Congratulations
You remind us too, that there is more than meets the eye. The words are simple, the thought is profound.
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Such a beautiful pen name that carries such meaning..
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Such a lovely, serene face. . . lovely tribute, my friend so far away.
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Absolutely beautiful. This stirs such a deep emotion within me to read it. Marion it is within ourselves that we find the nature of spirit whispering to us. In those whispers we find home and we are waiting for our arrival
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Liked where you went with the theme of the contest and how these ten short words explain you and what you stand for. Congratulations on taking silver in this contest.
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YOU WERE BORN TO HOLD A PEN.
VERY DEEP
AND CREATIVE.
GOD BLESS MY FRIEND
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Very interesting
Congratulations on the win! Very short piece, but incredibly profound!
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wow, what a sensational few rods...and how you define yourself...sacred, my girl, sacred.
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That's beauty in brevity.
Very serene and wonderful.
Congrats on the Silver, Marion!
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Here you show that few words don't keep you from showing your spirit. Great example of how brevity can work so well.
on, always on here on your pages
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The power of quiet beauty
The power of belief
The power of maa
Perfect!
M-C
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Subtle, complete, and concrete.
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congratulations on the silver!
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Beautiful!
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wow ~ truly powerful and deep
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