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maa

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maa

reminder of the source

of manifestation

calling me

home

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Author notes

maa - the initials of my social identity MArion MAntel

maa - the divine feminine

maa - the universal mother

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photo in border : sri mâ ânandamayî

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A contest entry

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  • MargaretG
    February 21

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    we need reminders

    Your brief poem shows the importance of naming, how we relate a spark of divinity to a place in the universe. A name can be a challenge or a label, but it is never neutral. I like the name you have chosen, and you remind me I should recall what my name means too. Congratulations for the trophy!


    • maa gold member
      February 21
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      I agree, my dear MAAAAAAArgaret !!!


      love you bunches


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    Your poetry runs as clear as a river and as deep as the ocean! Your name reflects like sunlight on water and I see that you will bore more in one sentence than many can do in a book.

    Congrats on the silver!

    Keep well
    Becks


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    Yes, my Friend.


  • Sandal
    June 11, 2008

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    Congratulations

    You remind us too, that there is more than meets the eye. The words are simple, the thought is profound.


  • malmadre gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    Such a beautiful pen name that carries such meaning..


  • WolfHeart
    June 8, 2008
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    Such a lovely, serene face. . . lovely tribute, my friend so far away.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 8, 2008

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    Absolutely beautiful. This stirs such a deep emotion within me to read it. Marion it is within ourselves that we find the nature of spirit whispering to us. In those whispers we find home and we are waiting for our arrival


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Liked where you went with the theme of the contest and how these ten short words explain you and what you stand for. Congratulations on taking silver in this contest.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    YOU WERE  BORN TO HOLD A PEN.

    VERY DEEP

    AND CREATIVE.

    GOD BLESS MY FRIEND 


  • ourgirlFriday
    June 8, 2008
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    Very interesting

    Congratulations on the win! Very short piece, but incredibly profound!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    wow, what a sensational few rods...and how you define yourself...sacred, my girl, sacred.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 8, 2008

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    That's beauty in brevity.
    Very serene and wonderful.
    Congrats on the Silver, Marion!


  • Mari Goes gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Here you show that few words don't keep you from showing your spirit. Great example of how brevity can work so well.
    on, always on here on your pages


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    The power of quiet beauty
    The power of belief
    The power of maa

    Perfect!

    M-C


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    Subtle, complete, and concrete.


  • crimsondew
    June 8, 2008
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    congratulations on the silver!


  • crimsondew
    June 8, 2008
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    Beautiful!


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    wow ~ truly powerful and deep

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