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Midnight Princess




My boyfriend’s amorous queen,
hidden within,
night's favorite esteemed flower.





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  • crimsondew
    June 8, 2008
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    Beautiful dear..throw open so many dreams...


  • notorious gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Wow--truly unique. Love the words 'amorous' and 'esteemed'.

    I love the first and last line best and the middle line just ties those 2 favorite lines of mine together so well...great write.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    just lovely... x