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Listen to the Quiet

Orchards odor meadows grass
A trickling stream
Mind at ease



A contest entry

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    Sigh... that was divine!! Being at ease in nature.. such a blessing!



    • Quiet places
      June 11, 2008
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      Thank you Jacks for the compliments on my poem. Happy you liked it. Don


  • Gwenevere
    June 10, 2008
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    Breathes in!!!!!!! Perfect.Peace at last, Ros


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    PERFECT!!!
    cant get much better than this.
    Best of luck in the contest.

    Delila


    • Quiet places
      June 9, 2008

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      Thank you Delila! Love your compliments! Always a pleasure hearing from you. Don


  • StarEyes
    June 8, 2008

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    Hey Bubs,

    This is fantastic! A lot said with few words! Very soothing at that!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • Quiet places
      June 9, 2008
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      Thank you Nyetta for the compliments and the inspiration. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don


  • Sanguinarius
    June 8, 2008
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    Excellent, very calming and gentle. Best of luck to you friend ~Bret~


  • dustookie2
    June 8, 2008

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    Ah to go there just to soak up the world around un in the most natural order. This is just so you my friend the peace of the quiet places we all hold dear. good luck in this contest....keeping the sanctuary of the mind


    • Quiet places
      June 9, 2008
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      Thank you Mook for the inspiring comment and compliments on my poem! So happy to hear you enjoyed it. The blessing of sanity. Ha! Don


  • notorious gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Mm...I felt like I was listening to the quiet here dude.

    "mind at ease"
    Wow. Sums up the entire poem like that...there's so much naturalistic imagery here and it totally coincides with your username so well!!

    Good luck =]


    • Quiet places
      June 9, 2008
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      Thank you my dear for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    fabulous imagery here... x


  • maa gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    your words gracefully resonate with the melody of the falling rain outside my window and the call of the baby-birds eager to be fed ... what a sacred moment ... this moment ...

    thank you,
    maa


    • Quiet places
      June 9, 2008
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      Thank you Maa for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don

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