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Poetic Grace

life's graceful agony
is penned upon
a tear stained notebook

A contest entry

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  • Maxboy gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Very Nice

    The last two comments, summed up, "beautifully-sad", is the feeling it brings out to me.
    Well Done


  • notorious
    June 8, 2008

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    Very sad and truthfully wrought-out. "a tear stained notebook" is my favorite line, although I think there should be a hyphen (-) in between tear-stained. =] Good luck!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    so beautifully crafted... x