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GO AWAY! (and a happy birthday to you! ;)

Dark Mood GO AWAY!
Chocolate Eating Peg Leg Pirates Want to Play!

Take the darkness from within
Grab its tail and give a spin
With eyes covered you cannot see
Where the tail should really be
Yet what harm comes when tail pins west?
It’s just a game, it’s no life test
And when the day is in the past
And you awake to the pirate’s mast
You should realize that growing old
Is better than the gift of gold
But only if you choose to seize
Each day that travels with the breeze
Now, chin up!  Ye pirate of olden days
And blow out the candles before your ship goes ablaze! 

           

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HAPPY, HAPPY, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

do a little dance
make a little love
get down to night!

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  • James R
    July 2
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    lmao very unique and very funny sis I always luv reading ya stuff always get a surprise as you are one of the people who can write anything and that keeps people with short attention spans like myself reading and amused wait what was I doing? oh yea commenting your write great job sis.


  • Hekate gold member
    June 12

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    I have read a lot of birthday poems before but none like this! This was sooooooo funny and made me laugh hard.
    Partyyyyyyyyyyyyy partyyyyyyyyyyyyy Whoot


  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 10

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    So festive this is and lively too, thanks for your entry and for sparking up our bash, good luck to you in the contest lol


  • Bionic Poet
    June 9
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    Here, let me add, umm, how about this smiley...

  • Melodies silver member
    June 8
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    Birthday cheer to last all year! Fun and fancy, smiles not chancy! THANK YOU for writing this splendid poem that comes with smileys in every line! Chasingtheday has a glorious sense of humour, so I know he loves this poem.


  • hear her breathe gold member
    June 8

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    lmao. What a strange birthday poem Momma!!! lmao But it's ok cause I know you're usually very cheery and sunshiney and thats why I love you!!!!!


  • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
    June 8
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    YAY...great entry in this contest Cuz. Best of luck

  • individuality gold member
    June 8

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    ah birthdays suck lol - thanks for the poem here, it is very animated and full of fun's pirate ways. the plank is ready.


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    June 8
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    Goosey was here!!!
    MWAH

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