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My home

I have a shabby castle of my own.
It is my home.
I must admit it’s only a flat
And, frankly speaking, it’s not mine at that.

My flat’s a ruin – no repairs
Were made in twenty five odd years
The only things bought by me here
Are books and the computer gear.

I’m not fastidious
It would be tedious,
The superstition
In my position.

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  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry in our fun contest. I wish you all the best come judging time. Recluse could do with all the help she needs in detering prospective buyers


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    I am pondering your last Stanza and will get back to you...this Could be a damn good backhanded write which I have read something into...Care to message me and explain your rhyme and reason in this?
    Thanks for entering
    Linda


    • Victor-S
      June 23, 2008
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      Have you heard of a Muse leaving the poet amidst the verse? This is the case.


      • Recluse Writer gold member
        June 23, 2008
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        I most definitely have
        Still it said something to me in a strange kinda way
        as I filled in the blanks with my own muse flappings!