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Willing

Swirling, twisting
No hope left
But still persisting

Blackness, pain
Life's eternal
Torturing bane

Crushing, killing
Sadly feeling
The victim is willing

Nothing

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This is about a girl who drowns herself to get away from her life.

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  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    June 8, 2008

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    Great use of words. It was so intense and short all at the same time. The note described everything oh so well. I loved it. Great write. Very strongly worded.