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Hot Damn

I wore the grimace of mindless--
menstrual manipulation,
before the joy of being stabbed--
with epidural's grief;

And those where the good days,
when bloated only applied to fish
and not to breasts--
engorged like watermelons,
seeping with each squeeze--
or stray caress;

Sitting through commercials--
where beautiful blonds
chanted "Have a happy period"
while wearing pants of virginal white;

Oh the hypocrisy made me gag,
as I fed myself chocolate--
intervenously of course
and waited to peel the paint off walls,
just so I could drown out the migraine--
taking up residence in my brain.

God is definitely a man,
because a woman--
wouldn't have given us such trials.
Which leads me to the conclusion--
that we can expect more of the same in hell,
cause hot damn--
that devil is a rotten man too...








 

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Your prompt is: Hell is just the next entertainment

(this line is from one of Lute's wonderful pieces and it has stuck in my head since reading it)

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  • Cannonsfire
    June 8, 2008

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    Sounds like hell hath no fury like a woman scorned and I hear that one loud and clear! Well done. Love, C

  • Now thats funny! Love that ending! Half the world's population is feeling the angst. This one should be a hit, then. Love the interweaving of feminine terms throughout--done so creatively!


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    psst, you forgot to credit Lute. I do know that Cannonsfire is being pedantic on that one rule.
    Men!!! I like what you are thinking! Love Juls