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Night Walker

Fired bullets, searching

anger, resentment

....hiding

 

Titillating,stimulating

engorged senses

....hunting

 

Questing demise

soul renderer

.... killing

 

Ashen soul

night stalker

....providing

 

Hells bedroom

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Hell is just the next entertainment By Lute

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  • grannyeri gold member
    June 7, 2008

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    Night can be so entertaining - for some the criminal aspects of the evening are the best, yet they are the worst of society and thrive on those less able to look after themselves. Interesting sentiments expressed here.


  • Kelli Marie
    June 7, 2008

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    oh...an outstanding take on the prompt. Very well written and nicely presented. Good luck to you in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Cannonsfire
    June 7, 2008

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    Nice job with this, can take this a thousand different ways in your head...sinning is fun but there is consequences. Love, C