Trust me honey
I'm not the one you should be worried about
You really need to look in a mirror
Before you lose yourself to the lies
I swear to you
Those ribbons make you look 10 years old
You'll be in trouble before you know it
And you know I'll just have to save you
I'm making this promise
You're not going to recognize yourself
You're trying to hard to mix the past and future
You just look like a girl in her mother's shoes
I'm trying to be honest
You'll be eaten alive with those ribbons
I can't tell who you've become these days
But that won't matter when you're another statistic
Author notes
Option 2: titles - 16) A Ribbon/Ribbons
A contest entry
- Heaps of Options!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
430 points, ended June 8, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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its a well written and kind of weird poem... but very nice
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hmmm.. well I have to say the poem is weird though funny to a certain point. Not what I expected for that title (which I forgot I pt in the first place) but thank you for entering something different using a totally different title from my list.
Keep on writing and good luck,
Nooni
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I think you did an awesome job on your take on the option prompt. Very well written. A great write. Good luck to you in the contest.
Kelli
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