Caught in blinding
reflections
and brilliantly heated
breaths
is the bringer of life
Author notes
Prompt: "Take me to the sun" in 13 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Take me to the sun by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 7, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good job SUNSHINE
sun in our eyes its hard not seein stars mind if i borrow yer UV100? lol
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I like the ending reference to Gustav Holst's Planets, your Sun, the Bringer of Life to his planets... and then brought to the personal level of reflections and breaths. Congratulations on the silver.
Marlene -
So simple, yet so profound. You were very deserving of your trophy. Well done. Bravo!
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A very nice piece, well expressed. And congratulations on the Silver trophy. You've written a very deserving poem
Dee
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Creatively penend and a unique take!! well deserved silver!
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How incredibly engaging... x
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Thank you so much. There were quite a few good pieces in your contest so I feel so honored to have won the silver. Thank you again.
Much Love
Carrie
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