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The Teddy Bears and Dog discover sweet 16

Have you looked  down the hole in the floor, right into the kitchen.
theres alot of activity somethings going on.
brian bear says it's Morgan's sweet 16 Birthday.
isn't she sweet enough?
theres lots of food down there, and a big cake.
Morgan's mom said they were having a party.
a beach pary.I want to go,i want to go!
Morgan can take us.oh here we go again.
how do you expect us to get to the beach.
sand in my toes, water splashing me, ants at a picic.
sunburn oh me, oh my says dog.
you want me to stay awake for that!UGH!
okay, Okay boys how's Morgan going to take us?
i'm goin down stairs and when they open up the big hole in the car i'm climbing in.i'll hide under something.says freddie bear.
we could climb in a box and pretend we are gifts says chester bear.
bouncing, shaking, and stuffed in there ,just what i want says donnie bear.
well there are four of us and dog.
we have to go it's sweet 16.
bears on  road trip, in a car, Oh great says dog.
what to do, what to do says chester bear.
how to hide in a car says freddie bear.
let's go with Aunt cindy and hide in her thing she calls a trailer..Oh theres a plan.i'm going to a party and i'm hiding out. great says dog.
we get to play hide and seek.wow says donnie bear.
but i want to party says brian bear.
food, cake fire works, who knows what else.
fun fun fun. oh me, oh my bears and dog belong at Morgan's room says dog.You slept through christmas, so you have to go.
can't morgan tea party with us and bring cake says dog.
Morgan's mom said cindy packed a tent, will hide in that.
okay lets go find cindy and the tent bag.
we need to get to Morgan's party.
goody loud music and lots of people.
it will be night time and noone will see us.
past my bed time says dog.Grump!
Let's Go! Let's Go Party

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this is another tale of the teddy bears and the snoring dog. this time they want to go to Morgan's 16 birthday party but how?

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  • xxIncompletexx
    June 27, 2008
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    OMG this is soo cool!!!!! I thought it was cute and and funny. I love teddy bears and dogs are sooo cute


  • MLMorin
    June 15, 2008

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    Hey, Brenda. Another great chapter in the continuing story of the Teddy Bears. So cute and a joy to read. You have a special talent for children's stories.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    A great childrens Teddy Bear story!

    Well friend! Here are you with a great flow in writing your specialty..Short childrens stories! Just the right length for nightime! I would like to help with a few sentences....but you are doing fine! Keep it up! Do you need an illustrator? Would love to help there too!


  • Chanson belle
    June 11, 2008
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    this is really cute, teddy bears and a dog trying to get to a party <3 well written


  • storiesuntold
    June 8, 2008
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    This is too cute

    What plans they had made and such excitment .This is too cute

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