My eyes are blackened from all the evil I have done
Nothing moves me anymore
I walk over dead bodies on the floor
After all I pulled the trigger
I laugh at their death
Walking out the door
No shame do I feel
When I see the families I have wrecked
It was fun getting their rich daddy into bed
Oh, I am filled with an icy chill
My soul is gone, it no longer exists
Repentance is screamed at me
I laugh, perhaps I will go to hell
I don't care anymore
The serpent from the garden
Is a close and treasured friend
With him life is all fun and games
You may think I am vindictive and twisted
But I only laugh in glee as my heart hardens
I live my life in sin
And I live it with a wide and sparkling grin
Going to hell doesn't sound to bad
It sounds like a adventure to be had
You can live your cookie-cutter life
And I will enjoy living mine
Maybe I will destroy yours out of spite
This life surely is divine
A contest entry
- One Hour-Prompt-Close when I see the winners!!! by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended June 8, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah satire...just the thoughts seeking revenge for a life not as it is wanted to be. Nice take on the prompt. You need to add the prompt and Lute as credit to your author's notes please

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Well done. Good Luck in the contest. Juls




