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Life Surely Is Divine

My eyes are blackened from all the evil I have done
Nothing moves me anymore
I walk over dead bodies on the floor
After all I pulled the trigger
I laugh at their death

Walking out the door
No shame do I feel
When I see the families I have wrecked
It was fun getting their rich daddy into bed

Oh, I am filled with an icy chill
My soul is gone, it no longer exists
Repentance is screamed at me
I laugh, perhaps I will go to hell
I don't care anymore

The serpent from the garden
Is a close and treasured friend
With him life is all fun and games
You may think I am vindictive and twisted
But I only laugh in glee as my heart hardens

I live my life in sin
And I live it with a wide and sparkling grin
Going to hell doesn't sound to bad
It sounds like a adventure to be had

You can live your cookie-cutter life
And I will enjoy living mine
Maybe I will destroy yours out of spite
This life surely is divine

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  • Cannonsfire
    June 7, 2008

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    Ah satire...just the thoughts seeking revenge for a life not as it is wanted to be. Nice take on the prompt. You need to add the prompt and Lute as credit to your author's notes please


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    Well done. Good Luck in the contest. Juls