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Sun

You brought light
Into my gloomy world.
Now take me to the sun.

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    I like the image this creates, a crack of light, through an opening door, now wanting more. Nice entry.
    Marlene


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    So sweet... x