Bastard child ! You dare mock me
and deign to speak so openly
of what you think that I should be ?
Please know the nature of my will...
it's souls and spirits that I kill.
You silly spawn, so lowly born
I am the one who makes men mourn
and leaves their dreams fore'er forlorn.
Don't think that you can question me
For I'm your written destiny.
A rabbit suit ? What need I do
to make you see which lies are true ?
I only show this face to you
as you are mine, my chosen one,
in the sullied suit of a man my son.
Author notes
Just runnin' with the cool video clip. Thanks for the contest.
A contest entry
- "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?" by Yuki Onna.
600 points, ended June 27, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think ?
Comments
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Hey this is eeringly cool! Kind of scary but very nicely done! You got the effect you wanted out of me!
Rey
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this had a very eerie feeling to it. thanks you for entering. i apologize for the long delay.
Y.o.
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Terrifyingly spot on take of the video clip. You captured the ambiance and the deeper meaning of the bizarre glimpse of another reality. Kudos!
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