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Passion Flares

Whisper your intentions
  hot across celestial bodies
      and I shall burn with you

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Prompt: 13 words on "Take me to the sun"

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    I like how a whisper gets transfered across astronomic distance to occupy passion's space. Very sensual write.
    Congratulations on the gold.
    Marlene


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    So much deep passion in so few words!!! Wowzers!! You just know I'm loving this!!!!

    Congrats on the gold!! Woot!


  • james119
    June 7, 2008
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    nice imagery
    strong emotion
    metaphoric
    good


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    fabulous imagery here... x

  • Seaquince
    June 7, 2008
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    wow................. this is great


  • tainfinite
    June 7, 2008

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    taiinfinite

    great imagery here whispering your intentions, flames do that dont they two legged ones as well lol good luck to you

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