Sun rising
Sun setting
Our hearts beat in between
Passion swells
Ardor wanes
Obsession given wings
Fly then to me
Let not shadows slow your flight
Offer love through Sun’s beams
Author notes
Photo copyright 2008 by WeAreFireflies. All rights reserved.
A contest entry
- WHAT DO YOU SEE? [2] by skylark anointed.
800 points, ended August 6, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You say a lot with just a few words.
My favorite line is:
Obsession given wings
I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for entering my contest!
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thanks for your comments! - Great photo BTW...
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beautifully written
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thank you for reading and taking the time to comment - I looked at your homepage because I was intrigued by your site name -
what is hidden behind "unbeliever'? -
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oh jeez, so many things I suppose...it started because i'm an athiest, but then i realized there is a whole list of things i don't believe in
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sounds kinda like if you flipped it around, you'd be a believer in atheism
I guess it'd be interesting if one pondered...opposites - or maybe ask the question, if you don't believe in something, does it really exist not to believe in in the first place... ???
dang, gave myself a headache
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huh, i hadn't thought of it that way.
thanks for the thoughts, now i've got a headache, hahaha
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well considering you were too tight fisted with clappies i will give none here, i mean come on - what is the big deal between 2 and 3?
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This is such a lovely toned, elegant writefull of zest, Wadewishing you to do quite well in the contest lol
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Lovely Imagery
Your words are soft and beautiful and go perfectly with the picture. At times obsession can be magnificant when it comes to love. In some instances it can be quite demanding. Its finding that right balance that can make love wonderful and lasting. Another great poem. Short and so sweet. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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thank you Miss Sandy - sometimes my muse likes to be concise
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You do manage to say alot in a few words. Not an easy task to do. Great poem
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