Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Mosquitos

Evening comes with the sound
Of high pitched whining
Oh joy, oh bliss
It's summer and the mosquitos
Have made their dreaded return

The sting of a bite
The loathed insects have a fill
And leave my body peppered
With the itchy bumps marked red
By my scratching and writhing

Tomorrow about 50 more
Bites will arise on my body
No matter how much I spray myself
They'll be back- they always are
I hate those stinkin Mosquitos!

Author notes

HA. I have writers block. It sucks

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • No longer in use
    November 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Comment Number Five

    O-My-Goodness!!! I hate mosquitoes too. Specially when I'm trying to sleep. It would be dark and my eyes are closed then all of a sudden...."EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE"
    AHHHHHHHHHHH Drives me nuts!!!

    And my nuts have good mileage. LOL OMGosh!! That was funny. Well not really if I found it was funny. Crap I just took away it's funnyness.

    Yes I make up words.

    Anyway what was I saying????

    OH yes, So that's when he said "Forgive me sir but your finger is in my soup!"

    LOL hahahahahahahahaha


    Well done poem.
  • starloverblue
    August 31, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    i to hate those annoying pest. i likes it
  • ApathysEnemy
    June 7, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    not bad 4 writers block... lmao... and random 2... good jarb!!!.. lmao

  • Lucian Valcor
    June 7, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    lol nice dedication to the vampire of the insects