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the virtues of humanity================

In the passage of time
dreams do play a vital part
making our unending desires
float to the fore front

Some times they guide us to destiny
if our sincerity in realizing them is unquestionable.

Some times they never mind
to frighten us like aqua born sharks.
It all happens only to make us
hold on and keep to the right  tracks
that highlight the virtues of humanity

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PIF Sea of Dreams
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  • Kelli Marie
    June 7, 2008

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    I think you did a great job with your take on the prompt. Very well written. I wish you good luck in the contest.
    Kelli