please dont look at me that way
because its not ok
dont even speak cause i know what your gonna say
those words that break me down
push my feelings to the ground
no way to defend myself or even move to look around
the problem is still here
that is what i fear
until we resolve it, it will forever be near
a different way of thinking
it just might send us sinking
if only it could end with ease like the ease of blinking
so much anger in the air
alone when you are there
a house that craves for some form of love and care
the problem is still among us
waiting to make a fuss
i cant just sit and wait for one of us to combust
but to you i dont know how to talk
when you get mad i turn and walk
choking on my tears as if my throat were stuffed with chalk
i said what i needed to
did what i felt i had to do
and still its all the same with you
push away the pain
hide the tears in rain
pretend like everything is ok again
shes not hurting everyday
shes not stuck on what to say
shes not dying on the inside for you because she wants to stay
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THIS ONES MY FAVORITE...
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Another great work expressing yourself and feelings Alicia. Sad and compelling. Thanks again!
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Problem solving is so much easier when looking from the outside in - if nursing has taught me anything, it's that! If only humans would calm the emotion and talk logically and solve their issues rationally... Then again, if we did that would we still be human?
Very thought provoking. The emotion that went into this piece is apparant and the short punchy form used adds to it. I hope you find the solution to your problems soon.
Take care
Hayley x
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this poems awesome not a bit of lag and its like a little story hehe ^-^ bye bye
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Great
Fantastic display of emotion and feeling, as well as a good flow and rhyme.
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Wowo great job! I love the story and the feeling you put in to this!
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Outstanding!
I really loved the way you worded and expressed this piece, one I can so easily relate too, but in the end walked away from.
"those words that break me down
push my feelings to the ground
no way to defend myself or even move to look around
the problem is still here
that is what i fear
until we resolve it, it will forever be near"So many problems left unresolved, and no way to talk about it... You have done such a great job in putting all your emotions into such a touching and powerful poem.
BRAVO!
Ron
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