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The Right Choice

the poison from the cup touched my lips
knowing that this was what i wanted i drank it all
it only took a few seconds for the poison to kick in
my heartbeat started to slow down
thoughts of you crossed my mind
thoughts about the times we've spent together
how much our parents hate each other
how our families are at war against one another
then the picture of your dead body
after my last heartbeat i knew that i made the right choice
and that was to be with my romeo

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  • wow

    that is really just ..... wow .... that is good i love it you are amazing it is just wow i am speechless and you better not ever think about really doing that lol i would have to kill you and then bring you back to clean up the mess then i would tell you i love you lol i love you


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    July 17, 2008
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    Ohhh, so sad... nicely done...