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Paril (Acrostic)

Passionate

And able to make me smile at a moments notice

Romantic

In all the ways that matter

Loving, being the best that you can be

Author notes

This is my first shot at acrostic in a looong time, so, be nice. Constructed criticism welcome.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 7, 2008

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    Surely never could
    opinion golden
    change concerning
    kindness you spread

     

    A good acrostic. Paril is fortunate that you wrote it.

    :)


  • Paril
    June 7, 2008

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    Love it!

    I love acrostics, but I love you more
    Totally awesome!

    -Jon