not a day goes by where you dont cross my mind
that accident shouldnt have happened but it did
and now youre gone and you arent going to come back
you left without saying goodbye
im just left here to cry
because of that day you had to die
A contest entry
- your most very personal poetry♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
475 points, ended September 7, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tears Ran Dry, Echoes Of Sadness (( Give Me Dark, Creepy, Sad, Cutting, Suicide, Ex.)) by HereComesTheSun.
550 points, ended September 14, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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such a great last line
a short but amazing poem
welcome on making the finalist for this competition
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Wowww. I am so incredibly sorry this happened to you :[[[ It is never a good experience to lose somebody close to you. I really hope that you're doing better, dear, and if you ever need anyone to talk to, you can talk to me :] Good luck with everything and thanks for this saddening entry♥
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