Yes, you there.
Your eyes,
they sparkle,
Shimmering and simmering
Flowing ideas-
Knobs turn inside your head
Without a place
To turn to
You
Have an undiscovered gift
I guarantee you
It exists.
Open your heart,
Love,
Praise.
You there,
Amaze me.
Astounding me with your
Wondrous, spectacular,
'false truth'
lies.
(these lies flow
from ideas, turning
into razor edged knives
with cutting tines)
Are you hiding from yourself?
I know so,
But please, I plead,
Don't remind me
How many times
I've had to say it.
You know in your heart
I'm right.
Suffocate your lies and put them to an end.
For you have a sparkle in your
Shimmering, simmering eyes.
A contest entry
- A totally awesome contest for kids 14 and under...but wait!You must not have won a GOLD trophie and/or SILVER trophie yet!!!!!!!!!(Please enter now....cuz i'm running out of things to say..er...type) by SmartBrick.
330 points, ended June 11, 2008, 7 entries
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Thoughts?
Comments
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I almost missed line 11. xD
I'm surprised you haven't won a gold/silver trophy D:
You seem like a great poet.
Lovits.
~Rei -
I liked this poem!Did you seriously just think this up on the spot?Why your good!Why This poem is good!I liked it very much!~
signed confused
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