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my story

I have Ten honorable mentions

How cold

I would trade them all for just one gold

Entering contests day in an day out

Trying to show what I am all about

But what do they comment

Its good for your age

That's all I get

After writing page after page

I can't even win a bronze trophie

I want to win so bad can't they see

So I entered this contest

For this is my chance

When I saw the promt I got up 
And did a little dance

I was so happy maybe I could win

So I thought what should I wright about

Love. Hate . Sin

But then it came to me

Ill wright about my story

And all of it so sad

Then every one will see

I want this gold bad

so ill follow every rule

Ill even take the time

To sit here and make sure
That all the lines rhyme

Ill call it my story for that is true

actually that's exactly what ill do

So here it is my finished entery

I hope I win

I have been trying for over a centuary

Well not that long

Well I am done I think you will like it

I hope I am not wrong =)




Author notes

Hello I hope you like this poem I think it is funny you might get a kick out of it but it realy is a true story lol and also get this my b day is june 21 the day the contests ends it fait for me to win lol thanks for having this contest

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  • jewlinz
    June 16, 2008
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    This has a poem of it's own mind. Thats why I like it it's beautiful stands out from the others


  • SmartBrick
    June 10, 2008
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    I love it even MORE...If that is even possible!lolz!Anyway This really knocked my socks off!I think I'm going to go some of your other poetry!This is really good and it has own in my heart!

  • SmartBrick
    June 9, 2008
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    AWWWWWWWW!O My Mongo!(Mongo is a name of a cat we had and for some reason I put it here instead of Mango like I normally do)Anyway...This is different than any other poem I've read!I really like this poem!It's one of my FAVORITES!

    Loves Confused♥
    Oh and P.s.!HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!