the train passed and didn't wait
i missed my chance, you've set a date
and it makes me cry
you've cut my air supply
i can't breath without you
i'm already suffocating, wishing death
every word rushes to my last breath
i can't look forward for life without you
my heart's not only skipping a beat
it's fading on the sidewalk on the street
and my eyes have become red
call the angels, for it i'd be glad
yes you, black beauty
you've left a hole inside of me
when you ripped my heart out
but never noticed how hard i used to shout
yes you, black beauty
you're the reason my eyes are teary
why my life is empty
for you've spelled love to rain on me
why i can't be merry
for you've ran with another to marry
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Excellent
tears and rain seem to be part of hurting, one cleans the soul while the other cleans the body. very touching and enjoyable to read
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thank you.
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balckky blacky:S darky :S inchu online chellargor:S
waaaa:S garodtsa iren :S inchu online chellargor:S -
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bro.. tas genegor vesdah....!!
tounal bedke tas enes u know!
yalla hok miner.. ge khosis hede.. -
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tas gnemgor of course
im wondering how's she doing ama i wonder what happpens if she reads these lool
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black beauty reminds me of black poetry:S:s
sis i cant stop thinkin about that black angel:S
u know we've talked yesterday
i think u'r right about her
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hehe i know what it reminds you of.. i mean who.. and i know you like that black angel.. don't hesitate bro
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I think some parts need work...but this is a good poem..and I enjoy the name a lot!!
I mean whose poem couldn't use something...right? ?
Good job.
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