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Inside

I want to run my nails
down your spine
make you scream,
make you wine

Hold you so close
lost in embrace
touching skin-to-skin
kissing face-to-face

Sweat beads run
down your shaking form
a silent pulping
of pre-calmed storm

Fingers interlocked ahead
Feeling moisture in your hair
our mouths gaping open wide
Gasping,gaping to be...


INSIDE

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  • XfaceXdownX
    June 10, 2008
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    great freegin flow!! This is amazing.

    Brit


  • the affluent poor
    June 9, 2008

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    i miss you...

    and maybe it's my bohemian idealistic heart aching for love, but this INSIDE business i don't see as sexual innuendo. rather the search for the inside of the person...like the true soul, the real in the midst of the peak of the sexual crescendo when body and mind and soul are laid completely vulnerable...laid completely bare....

    get me?

    gah. i need somebody to fall in love with who will fall in love back >.<

    i guess i just miss you brother. a lot.


  • TonightlessWithU
    June 7, 2008

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    oh my goodness Mike its amazing it makes me very happy.... i award u a triple aplause cuz its so great(and i also love you!)
    Love, Sammi<3